Ah

Distraught at my inability to write an ethereal poem, I made an attempt at another one. Make that another two. And neither of them got past the first stanza. Though they did make good efforts. This poem is what came, finally, when I just let go and wrote what came to mind. This here is just string after string of unbridled thought. Hope it at least brings comfort.

Ah, blissful peace and surrender.
Sweet, cool air, blow your gentle breath across my weary brow.
Relax my burdened shoulders.
Soothe that which burns endlessly.
Ah, blissful peace and surrender.
Give to me your contentment.
You've plenty to share.
Share it with me, who loves you.
Ah, blissful peace and surrender.